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Friday, September 14, 2018

Candy land


11/9
Rainbow drops stand like giants. Magical lights like  the sun. Round sugar buns roll like rocks. Mud brown glows and melts like butter. The green leafy trees blows in the wind.Glowing sun shines over the grass. I look around i knock on the hard door. I listen to the whistling birds. I walk into the hard floor the walls creek  my heart races. I magically get stuck into the walls. The clear windows shimmer like stars.It brightly shines like crystals in a cave. The creamy door sticks like glue. The sticks stand like a giraffe. The steps cracks when i walk.Smells like magical  dust.

2 comments:

  1. hey Addie i like how you rite about candy land you have a great understated story. i like how you rite rainbow drops stand like giants and the clear windows shimmer like stars.

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