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Friday, August 31, 2018

My Special Person My Baby Brother

My Special!
Person
My Baby Brother
His shiney blue eyes shimmer like stars in the night sky. His blonde hair glistens underneath the sun. His hands feel like white pillows. He walks like a wobbly penguin. He acts like a grizzly bear when he is tired. He growls at me like a tiger. His soft skin feels like soft feathers out of my pillow.
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 25, 2018 at 11:33 AM

    It sonds like you love him

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 25, 2018 at 11:56 AM

    I love this because you used good information about your baby brother.
    Did you know that I did not know about your brother?
    Next time you could write more about your brother.
    Why did you write about your baby brother?

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 25, 2018 at 12:03 PM

    I like that you added full stops and capital letters.

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